Opening lines are a tricky business for us writers, Gentle Reader. I had cause to dive into some of my favorite books in
order to research great opening lines recently. (Mostly as a means of abject
Here are a few I tracked down:
those are all pure fantasy, a couple are retellings of fairy stories, generally comedic, and two are written for young adults.
- "In the land
of Ingary, where such things as seven-league boots and cloaks of
invisibility really exist, it is quite a misfortune to be born the
eldest of three." ~ Diana Wynne Jones, Howl's Moving Castle
- "That fool of a fairy Lucinda did not intend to lay a curse on me." ~ Gail Carson Levine, Ella Enchanted
was a large kingdom, just east of the Mountains of Morning, where
philosophers were highly respected and the number five was fashionable."
~ Particia C. Wrede, Dealing with Dragons
was a man and he had eight sons. Apart from that, he was nothing more
than a comma on the page of History. It's sad, but that's all you can
say about some people." ~ Terry Prachett, Sourcery
Those are both my kind of high fantasy, sword & sorcery adventures, note they start with action and they feature strong female main characters and a nice dose of romance.
above we have three sci-fi. The first is a hard-hitting dystopian YA,
the second a survivor in space saga, and the last is military SF.
- "We went to the moon to have fun, but the moon turned out to completely suck." ~ M.T. Anderson, Feed
the Catteni, mercenaries for a race called the Eosi, invaded Earth,
they used their standard tactic of domination by landing in fifty cities
across the planet and removing entire urban populations." ~ Anne
McCaffrey, Freedom's Choice
- "And the moral of the story: never call a two star general a basterd to his face." ~ Tanya Huff, The Better Part of Valor
can tell that both of these are going to involve doctors as main
characters: the first is a romance fantasy and the second a space opera.
- "I pulled the shard out just as his wound began spurting blood." ~ Elizabeth Vaughan, Warprize
bet Hippocrates never stepped one foot into a dump like this, I thought
as I peered through the tavern's narrow entrance." ~ S.L. Viehl, Stardoc
This last set is a mishmash, urban fantasy and historical fantasy, just because they're two of my favorite genres.
- "I didn't realize he was a werewolf at first." ~ Patricia Briggs, Moon Called
I was a young boy, if I was sick or in trouble, or had been beaten at
school, I used to remember that on the day I was born my father wanted
to kill me." ~ Mary Renault, The Last of the Wine
seem to be some trends in opening lines. Mind you, I
refuse to put this under scientific study, so this is all wild
speculation. Most SF/F authors opt to start with setting or character
description. I'd say this is the hardest and most challenging way to
begin. You really have to write description exceedingly well to pull in a
reader's attention in this age of short attention spans. As a reader, I
rarely stick with a book if it opens with paragraphs of description.
Which brings me round to that small pocket of authors who lean in favor
of opening with dialogue. I like this, and do it often myself.
More recent works launch with an action sequence, needless to say, I
like this as well, but it can be kind of a cop-out.
about you, Gentle Reader, favorite opening lines? ("Best of times, worst
of times" doesn't count.)
Or how about great favorite books with awful starts to
"Miss Alexia Tarabotti was not enjoying her evening."
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